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some people say that it's better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #language #students #classes #matter
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Nowadays, people believe that learners will get better results when they
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 in small classes while
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students
 will not effect to
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results
. I totally agree with the
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 statements,
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 essay will discuss both views of
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 matter. The unique benefits of learning in
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 which a number of students is that it allows the
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 more opportunities to
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 with their classmates. Since different individuals own different
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 methods as well as levels, by approaching frequently, they can
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teach
 each other. In fact, being
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a master
 in a language requires learners practice their skills
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every day
, more people practice together which help learners improve faster.
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, Hello is the biggest language
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
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 in Vietnam, they usually organize outdoor speaking classes in the weekend, students having different levels can join and practice together. There are many of advantages when people choosing to learn in small classes, which lead me totally agree which the statement mentions about
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 language in
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small classes
a small class
the small class
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.
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, by interacting more frequently with teachers, students will enhance their results faster.
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 means that teachers play a vital role in
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, who understand strong points and weak points of each
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student
, so they can give
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the plant
a plant
 for
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 to improve their learning results.
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, if
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 in
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 with limited students, learners will have more opportunities to approach with learning facilities. In fact, in order to enhance listening skills, individuals have to
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spend
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to
 listen which requires good earphones or computers. Take
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 Fighter the most famous in Vietnam about teaching English as an example, they organize one-to-one
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 or one
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 with a computer to help their
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 improve their
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pronunciation
 or listening skills. In conclusion, studying languages in a big group
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 offers a
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benefit, but
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 in a small
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having
 more benefit. By balancing between the number of
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students
 in
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, students will have the best results.

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