Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing regarding some luggage I regretfully neglected to take with me following the arrival of flight GE773 from Corfu to London Gatwick at 15:30 on Tuesday 17th June. My designated seat was 64C and my booking reference is AFX19330. The

bag

is a small brown leather handbag with an embroidered design reading “I love Corfu”. Inside the

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you will find some cosmetics, a small diary, a mobile phone and various souvenirs. The phone is only a back-up and the cosmetics are replaceable, but the diary and souvenirs have a great deal of personal value so I would greatly welcome their return. I believe I left the

bag

under my seat in my hurry to get through the airport and did not realise until I got to my hotel. I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible should you locate the

bag

. If you could send it to me by courier service, I would be most grateful. I would be happy to pay for the service. Thank you for your help, I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Michelle Johnson

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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