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Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and regulations?

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Many people believe that
copyright
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 laws may be counterproductive and could hinder creative endeavour;
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, personally, I disagree with
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 idea and opine strongly that the protection of intellectual property is crucial to a well-functioning society, and, in fact, encourages the production of
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 works by providing a framework within which innovators may be adequately rewarded for their efforts.
Copyright
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regulations
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 may prevent people from expanding on existing ideas, but a key purpose of
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 rules is to ensure that new ideas are sufficiently original to warrant financial reward. It is unlikely that members of the public could discern an original piece from fraud, and so the support of the courts is necessary in order to uphold standards of originality. The US federal government states,
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, that
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 laws exist to stimulate artistic creativity for the general public good
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 and to ensure reasonable return to authors and inventors. Through
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 process, the law establishes incentives for producing new works, which in turn encourages learning, progress, and development. Without
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, individuals would be free to copy another’s work. As mentioned above, the general public cannot reasonably be expected to defend authenticity, and so would-be fraudsters may receive a financial reward comparable to that of the originator. Resultantly, in countries with substandard protections for artists,
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, creative output is consistently and considerably lower than that of nations with strong intellectual property
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 since the genuine owner of the work is afforded little protection or reward. If we accept that more creative output is good for society,
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copyright
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 law can be taken as the same.
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,
copyright
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regulations
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 are an essential tool for the promotion of creativity, and society tends to function better with their enforcement.
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