You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire if you would be so generous as to provide me

some

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information about your

sports

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club

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. I am a

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first-year

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first year

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student

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Olympia college and residing in a hostel

that is

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adjacent to your

club

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. I have a great interest in

sports

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and was the captain of my school's volleyball team. Unfortunately, our college or hostel does not offer

sports

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and recreational facilities. Seeing my disappointment, one of our seniors recommended your

club

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; which is why I am curious to know about your esteemed

sports

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centre. I would appreciate

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it if

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you could provide some information about the basic facilities offered here.

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, I would like to know the age bracket and

skilllevel

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skill level

of your members to better understand the

club

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environment. Can you

also

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share the

sports

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club

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fee details to make my decision of availing your services a little easier

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I hope my requests did not inconvenience you so much. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Your

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sincerely, XYZ

Mon Oct 28 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

169 words

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