You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire if you would be so generous as to provide me

some

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information about your

sports

club

. I am a

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first-year

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first year

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student

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Olympia college and residing in a hostel

that is

adjacent to your

club

. I have a great interest in

sports

and was the captain of my school's volleyball team. Unfortunately, our college or hostel does not offer

sports

and recreational facilities. Seeing my disappointment, one of our seniors recommended your

club

; which is why I am curious to know about your esteemed

sports

centre. I would appreciate

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you could provide some information about the basic facilities offered here.

Additionally

, I would like to know the age bracket and

skilllevel

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skill level

of your members to better understand the

club

environment. Can you

also

share the

sports

club

fee details to make my decision of availing your services a little easier

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I hope my requests did not inconvenience you so much. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Your

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sincerely, XYZ

Mon Oct 28 2019

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