some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for children . how far do you agree or disagree?
Part of the society is of
belief
that Suggestion
the belief
tv
programs are of no actually beneficial for younger generation. The factors which have contribute
to Suggestion
have contributed
this
statement are that addiction
and bad content
which are broadcasting
through the television. I Suggestion
is broadcast
is broadcasting
partially agrees
with the above statement because, television programs provide respectable education programs as well as Suggestion
partially agree
am partially agreeing
have partially agreed
quality
entertainment for children .
There are many reasons why Accept space
.
tv
programs are not beneficial for the children. Such
as addiction
and inappropriate content
. The problems which followed by the addiction
are that the children are waste
time and they will deprive the interest in studies. They won’t be able to interact with social activities. Suggestion
wasting
Furthermore
,
since they are vulnerable they will easily catch up inappropriate Accept space
,
behaviors
. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
For example
sex content
, violence and foul language. To illustrate above facts ,
Accept space
,
tv
series like game
of thrones have broadcasted so much of sexual and Suggestion
a game
violence
Suggestion
violent
content
. the
prospective consequences are that they can develop health issues Suggestion
The
such
as vision problems due to the addiction
, mental issues due to heavy inappropriate content
. Moreover they
will become more violent and become bullies in the society.
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Moreover, they
On the other
hand there
are positive impacts of youngsters watching television. These positive Accept comma addition
hand, there
causes
are that, there are many educational programs which are more beneficial for children. an occurrence of something
cases
In
addition there
are Accept comma addition
addition, there
quality
entertainment programs which are more suitable for children. By following such
programs children may gain more knowledge and spend quality
time. For
instance if
they watch animal planet they will improve their observational skills.
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instance, if
being expose
to violence and addicted to Suggestion
exposed
are exposed
were exposed
is exposed
was exposed
tv
programs will result in children developing bad habits and health issues. If they use it for educational purposes and quality
entertainment it will result, improving observational skills and general knowledge. This
writer partially agrees that tv
programs are of no real value for children.Submitted by nethme_2007 on
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