some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for children . how far do you agree or disagree?

Part of the society is of
belief
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the belief
that
tv
programs are of no actually beneficial for younger generation. The factors which
have contribute
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have contributed
to
this
statement are that
addiction
and bad
content
which
are broadcasting
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is broadcast
is broadcasting
through the television. I
partially agrees
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partially agree
am partially agreeing
have partially agreed
with the above statement because, television programs provide respectable education programs as well as
quality
entertainment for children
.
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.
There are many reasons why
tv
programs are not beneficial for the children.
Such
as
addiction
and inappropriate
content
. The problems which followed by the
addiction
are that the children are
waste
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wasting
time and they will deprive the interest in studies. They won’t be able to interact with social activities.
Furthermore
,
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,
since they are vulnerable they will easily catch up inappropriate
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
.
For example
sex
content
, violence and foul language. To illustrate above facts
,
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,
tv
series like
game
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a game
of thrones have broadcasted so much of sexual and
violence
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violent
content
.
the
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The
prospective consequences are that they can develop health issues
such
as vision problems due to the
addiction
, mental issues due to heavy inappropriate
content
.
Moreover they
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Moreover, they
will become more violent and become bullies in the society.
On the other
hand there
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hand, there
are positive impacts of youngsters watching television. These positive
causes
an occurrence of something
cases
are that, there are many educational programs which are more beneficial for children.
In
addition there
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addition, there
are
quality
entertainment programs which are more suitable for children. By following
such
programs children may gain more knowledge and spend
quality
time.
For
instance if
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instance, if
they watch animal planet they will improve their observational skills. In conclusion
being expose
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exposed
are exposed
were exposed
is exposed
was exposed
to violence and addicted to
tv
programs will result in children developing bad habits and health issues. If they use it for educational purposes and
quality
entertainment it will result, improving observational skills and general knowledge.
This
writer partially agrees that
tv
programs are of no real value for children.
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