You want to sell some of your furniture and you think one of your friends might be interested to buy it. Write a letter to this friend. Why you are selling it. Describe the furniture he/she might be interested in. Invite your friend to have a look.

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Hi Nami, I am writing

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letter to you because I am selling my armchair which I thought you might be interested in. I hope

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letter finds you well.

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, I want to tell you about the reason of sell.

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week, I walked around a furniture store, and I saw a chair and I loved it. I have been thinking about changing it for a

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. I think the new chair was found I was looking for. As you know, the armchair is dark grey and velvet fabric. It has four seats and a good condition. As you wish, it can be transformed into a large bed for your guests. I would like to sell it to you for a reasonable price. If you are available on Saturday, I would like to invite you to take a look at my place. Please let me know soon. Take care. Yours lovingly Fizz

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task achievement

Try to make the reason for selling a bit clearer and concise. It feels a bit scattered. Minor improvements in clarity can enhance the task achievement score.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea. For instance, describing the armchair and discussing the invitation can be kept in distinct sections.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is very friendly and suitable for the purpose, which is commendable.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are very well done, making the letter personable and warm.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

interested
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furniture
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condition
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