You want to sell some of your furniture and you think one of your friends might be interested to buy it. Write a letter to this friend. Why you are selling it. Describe the furniture he/she might be interested in. Invite your friend to have a look.
Hi Nami,
I am writing
this
letter to you because I am selling my armchair which I thought you might be interested in. I hope this
letter finds you well.
Firstly
, I want to tell you about the reason of sell. Last
week, I walked around a furniture store, and I saw a chair and I loved it. I have been thinking about changing it for a while
. I think the new chair was found I was looking for.
As you know, the armchair is dark grey and velvet fabric. It has four seats and a good condition. As you wish, it can be transformed into a large bed for your guests. I would like to sell it to you for a reasonable price. If you are available on Saturday, I would like to invite you to take a look at my place.
Please let me know soon.
Take care.
Yours lovingly
FizzSubmitted by jigglypuff
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task achievement
Try to make the reason for selling a bit clearer and concise. It feels a bit scattered. Minor improvements in clarity can enhance the task achievement score.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea. For instance, describing the armchair and discussing the invitation can be kept in distinct sections.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is very friendly and suitable for the purpose, which is commendable.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are very well done, making the letter personable and warm.