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Some people think watching sports is waste of leisure time. What is your opinion?

#people #sports #waste #leisure #time
Part of the society is of the belief that watching sports is
misuse
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a misuse
 of spare
time
. The factors which
are contributed
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contribute
 to
above statement
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the above statement
 are that it can
cause
health
 issues and addictions. I
partially agrees
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partially agree
am partially agreeing
have partially agreed
 with
this
 statement Because watching sports
can be have
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can have
positive impact
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a positive impact
 on a person’s life.
Such
 as it can be helpful someone to
buildup
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build up
 a personality as well as different skills and it can be build motivation within an individual. Nowadays people are more prone to watch sports. Sports are supposed to keep people healthy and active. Watching sports for a long
time
 sitting
can be
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can cause
cause
 various types of
health
 issues.
For
example obey
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example, obey
 sixty. Obesity is a major problem where it can
cause
 many more
health
 issues
such
 as diabetes and hypertension.
Leisure
time
 is a
time
 where it has to be
use
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used
 as a stress reliever
,
Accept space
,
 rather than spending on watching sports they can
spen
pass time in a specific way
spend
spin
span
 a quality
time
 with friends and family. Watching sports can be beneficial as well.
For
example it
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example, it
 can be a motivation for people where they get temptation to be more active and spend their
leisure
ti
in the direction of
to
,
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,
e in a valuable way.
Such
 as play one of the sports.
More over
in addition
Moreover
, watching sports can develop a person’s
skills
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skill
,
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,
 fro
example
 leadership skills
,
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,
 companionship skills
,
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,
 not only by watching but
also
 implementing as well. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
 there are two sides to
above statement
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the above statement
.
Accept space
.
 Where is watching sports on
leisure
time
 can be
cause
 negative impact in a
persons
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person's
 valuable
leisure
time
,
Accept space
,
for
example
 by getting
addiction
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addicted
addicting
 and
also
 can be
cause
health
 issues. It
also
 can be
use
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used
 as a useful method to spend
leisure
time
 by learning about leadership skills and social skills and
also
 by getting
motivate
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motivated
 to be
involve
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involved
 in a sport as well. It’s partially agreed that watching sports can be a waste of
leisure
time
.
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