University students are increasingly studying aboard as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying aboard outweigh the disadvantages?

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There are a lot of university students that are studying abroad as part of their university studies. In my essay I will write the advantages and

desadvantages

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantages

disadvantage

of studying abroad.

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this

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statement I can say that studying abroad

give

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gives

you the possibility to see how other student are learning. There are a lot of students that

studies foreign

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studies, foreign

languages and

durring

all the way through

during

their

studies they

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studies, they

go visit one of the country that the language they are

study

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studying

studied

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Furthermore they

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Furthermore, they

have the

chance

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not only to learn the language but to see

the the

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the

culture of that country.

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Moreover studying

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Moreover, studying

abroad gives the student the

chance

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to become more independent and to know himself.

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a student that goes to Japan to study telecommunication will have the

chance

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to learn to make new friends

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to adapt himself to a new country

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new culture

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new cuisine. At the glance all being young and studying abroad gives you the

chance

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to open your eyes and to discover yourself. Another example that I can give is

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about

myself. When I

stared

take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

started

studying in

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the UK

, I saw

that is

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another learning system better

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then

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than

the one that I was used

with

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Finally studying

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Finally, studying

abroad can make you feel sometimes lonely as students are far from their's families and their friends, as much as the

tehnology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

has

raise

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raised

and we can speak and see people from

arround

in the area or vicinity

around

round

the world, not seeing your closed ones can be very stressful. In conclusion the

chance

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that students that study abroad is unique as they will have

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open view about other countries and they can choose what to do with their future carriers.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

280 words

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