Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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essay discusses about the problems faced by the countries because of the combination of population
and education. The world is facing different situations only due to illiteracy. I think this
is directly connected to the peoples way of life.
In our nation itself there
are many states where literacy is low. Citizens are uneducated. Due to which they don't know about the pros and cons of the Accept comma addition
itself, there
over
too much population
overpopulation
population
. They only think about earning more money in other hand they
forget about feed more members. The country is going to face a huge Accept comma addition
hand, they
issues
in Suggestion
issue
next
10 years. The total population
will increase and that may cause difficulties in the lives of coming generations. The unempolyment
is shouting very high. The natural resources are the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
also
getting diminished in the enviornment
. The coming generation the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
have
nothing left. Suggestion
has
when
the number of Suggestion
When
human
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humans
raise
the vehicles Suggestion
raises
also
increse
in the road which become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
increased
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past tense of "will"
would
workload
leads
to Suggestion
lead
polluation
. Even if they are educated, they come up with new technology. And undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
this
will cause reduction
in the Suggestion
a reduction
man
work.
The government should provide certain any very large body of (salt) water
main
voluntry
classes to the of your own free will or design; done by choice; not forced or compelled
voluntary
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citizens for able to read and write
literate
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awareness regarding the the act of acquiring something
getting
population
related problems. Thy
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should be give
proper Suggestion
should give
should be given
knowlegde
regarding these pros and cons. Make them aware that as the the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
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become bigger or greater in amount
increase
income the
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income, the
also
incresing
. The creative members of becoming greater or larger
increasing
this
nation should given
a chance or promote them to start their own businesses. Suggestion
give
this
would lead to employment. Suggestion
This
For example
, if a whole village is jobless and a person among them started a business. The village can be emploied
having your services engaged for; or having a job especially one that pays wages or a salary
employed
in
that company. Suggestion
with
Like wise
unemployment can be reduced. Due to large Suggestion
Likewise
utilizers
of the resources, the materials are someone who puts to good use
utilisers
scare
in the get by special effort
secure
envivornment
. These have to be saved for the use for the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
future
.We have to find comparatively similar things to satisfy the demand. More than that the price of these Suggestion
the future
scare
resources must be raised. only a very short time before
scarce
he
government should promote he public to use public transport Suggestion
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fo
the daily use other than personal cars. Which would reduce pollution.
To conclude, the situation in the countries around the world can be controlled by the citizens of that nation itself. They have to come up with rules and regulations to handle these issues.appropriate to; intended for
for
to
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