Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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essay discusses about the problems faced by the countries because of the combination of

population

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and education. The world is facing different situations only due to illiteracy. I think

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is directly connected to the peoples way of life. In our nation

itself there

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itself, there

are many states where literacy is low. Citizens are uneducated. Due to which they don't know about the pros and cons of the

over

too much population

overpopulation

population

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. They only think about earning more money in other

hand they

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hand, they

forget about feed more members. The country is going to face a huge

issues

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issue

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10 years. The total

population

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will increase and that may cause difficulties in the lives of coming generations. The

unempolyment

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

is shouting very high. The natural resources are

also

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getting diminished in the

enviornment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. The coming generation

have

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has

nothing left.

when

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When

the number of

human

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humans

raise

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raises

the vehicles

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increse

become bigger or greater in amount

increase

increases

increased

in the road which

woukld

past tense of "will"

would

workload

leads

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lead

polluation

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

. Even if they are educated, they come up with new technology. And

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will cause

reduction

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a reduction

in the

man

any very large body of (salt) water

main

work. The government should provide certain

voluntry

of your own free will or design; done by choice; not forced or compelled

voluntary

classes to the

litetrat

able to read and write

literate

citizens for

gettig

the act of acquiring something

getting

awareness regarding the

population

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Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

374 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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