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Both Rich and poor find it difficult to accessibility to university education.Do you agree or disagree

#accessibility #university #education
This
 21st century students are finding it difficult for accessing university
education
 irrespective of which financial background they are coming from.I totally agree to
this
 above said statement.
Firstly
, there are multiple factors that make
this
 notion true.The system of
education
 and its
level
 has been changed over the time since British rule has been eradicated in India.The fact is that
lot
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a lot
lots
 of changes
has been made
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have been made
 to the set standards of every
universities
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university
 in order to compete at a global
level
.
Therefore higher
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Therefore, higher
criterias
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
 are set in terms of marks for secondary
education
 and entrance exam as well.
This
 leads to
higher
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a higher level
level
 of competition among all classes of society irrespective of caste and creed.Recent studies have shown that there are more number of people who are educated
atleast
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at least
 till university
level
, which they continue their legacy for their family generations to come.
Secondly
, growth of coaching
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 as well as tuitions
have helped
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has helped
 weaker students to score more thereby created an atmosphere of mere competition.
This
 encouraged many less privileged student
community
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communities
 to challenge themselves and explore their hidden challenges.It made them to widen
thier
of them or themselves
their
 horizon and lead to
creation
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the creation
 of a very challenging environment.The entrance exam to premier institute's like IIT's, NIT's are very complex and challenging to crack.
Therefore with
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Therefore, with
mere learning
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the mere learning
 of concepts will not work for these type of competitive exams.Deep learning and understanding of concepts only pays off,
otherwise
 there will be a constant decline of pupils admitted to premier institutes. In conclusion, amidst of all these factors university
education
 will be rewarding to students who work hard all throughout his primary and secondary
education
 with
clear idea
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a clear idea
clear ideas
 of
learned
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learning
 concepts and
thier
of them or themselves
their
 corresponding application in real life scenarios.

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