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In many countries teenagers are encouraged to do part time jobs. What's the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part time jobs

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Some countries
such
 as the USA and UK encourage their secondary school students to do a part time jobs. There are many pros and cons of
this
 practice, which shall be discussed in
this
 essay. On the positive, te
enagers
Suggestion
teenager's
job
 can teach
work
 skills that will serve him well in college and prepare him for careers in adulthood. The right jobs may expose him to new
work
 possibilities and set him on a on the path to a lifetime career. Teens
also
 ga
me u
a quantity that is added
gain
seful, marketable skills
such
 as improving the communication, learning how to handle people, developing interview skills and filling out
job
 applications. To add to it, he can acquire confidence, develop a sense of responsibility in feel more independent. Earning money will enable him to buy things he wants and will provide in
o
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an
pportunity for learning responsible money management. What is
more studies find t
Suggestion
has more studies found
does more studies find
are more studies finding
have more studies found
are more studies found
is more studies find
hat students who
work
 moderate amount no more than 10 to 15 hours a week during the school years te
n 2
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 on
h
Suggestion
for
igher grades
th
en t
conjunction used in comparatives
than
hose who don't
work
 at all.
Furthermore
, if parents
work
 outside the home, in after school
job
 can give the te
enager adult s
Accept comma addition
teenager, adult
upervision in those crucial afternoon hours.
On the other hand
, walking more than 13 to 20 hours a week associated with lower grades. Teens who
work
 too many hours find difficult to keep up extra co
c
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Co
urricular activities in social relationships. Some studies have found their teens
wo
rk l
Suggestion
to work
ong hours are more likely to engage in
such
 risky activities as using illegal drugs or alcohol in part because they are exposed to older co
w
a hard ferromagnetic silver-white bivalent or trivalent metallic element; a trace element in plant and animal nutrition
Co
orkers who lead them astray.
Finally
, early entry into Harsh or negative environment may increase negative views of
wo
rk.
Suggestion
the work
th
is w
Suggestion
This
ould depend greatly on the maturity level of the teenager and the type of
job
 obtained. In India, teenagers generally do not
work
 part time.
This
 practice has recently started in big cities but is not very popular yet. Summing up, teenagers indefinitely benefited by working.
However
, the type of
work
 should be carefully chosen and should not be allowed to
work
 more than 10 to 15 hours a week. Muzammil Abbas Supriya Choudhury
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