Some people believe that telephone is the greatest invention of the last century. To what extent do you agree?

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live without a telephone. Due to which it
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is considered
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is the greatest invention of the
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century. I agree with
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statement.
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Just
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
of
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invention, the lives of people has become easier.
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Even though
, it has given negative impact on the coming generation.
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, lets talk about the thing without which people can'
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live nowadays. A telephone
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provides
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a lot
of facilities.
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invention
help
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helps
the long distance relation to
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an opening that permits escape or release
exit
exist
exits
. The
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a thin sliver of wood
splinted
families can keep contact with each others and
do
engage in
make
video calls.
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, it will make us remind about the important dates and things. The
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can feed all our needed contacts and photos which are close to us.
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users don'
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need to
remamber
recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection
remember
all the numbers and keep prints of the photos.
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, earlier we used to keep a
dariy
a daily written record of (usually personal) experiences and observations
diary
to note down the numbers of the relatives.
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Likewise our
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Likewise, our
drawers will be filled with albums of pictures.
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the electronic device have come
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at
into
the hands of
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the public, they
the public they
find free places in
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the house
a house
. These are the basic things which the users enjoy.
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, now the device
provide
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provides
a lot of facilities. There are many applications which would make publics life easier. The version of the phones
are changing
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is changing
day by day.
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the meanwhile, mankind doesn'
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need to go out for anything. Because the application in the cell
phone
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would bring everything to the
door steps
the sill of a door; a horizontal piece of wood or stone that forms the bottom of a doorway and offers support when passing through a doorway
doorsteps
. Individuals can transfer money to others, can order food, apply of exams, pay bills, do
shopping sitting at
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shopping, sitting at
home, etc.
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as, Google Pay, Uber Eats, Amazon, Flipkart, etc. There
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use of the cell
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, it helps in finding the location. That means we will never get lost in the mid way.
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, human beings are getting used to these
faclities
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
faculties
.
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.
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Also individuals
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Also, individuals
find problem without the device. To conclude, the
moblie
migratory
mobile
phones are
usefull
being of use or service
useful
for mankinds and it
make
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makes
life better. With a
divce
the legal dissolution of a marriage
divorce
diverse
device
human
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begins
can
servive
continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
like anything.
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would give direction in an unknown place and even if there is no money the
phone
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can do a lot for us.
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