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Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

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One of the special and meaningful relationships include friendship, which is not only special, but
also
 very complicated sometimes. From our schooling to our death
,
Accept space
,
 friends are the ones to whom we can share everything without any doubt, but due to some misunderstandings, there might be some complications that can be solved by some discussions. A great
friend
 must be honest, open minded, and truthful.
Friend
 is the one who must stand beside in our bad times as well as good times. Executing stupid things with
lot
Suggestion
a lot
 of courage is always special and which turn
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 memories some day.
Friend
 is the one to whom we can call at
anytime
Suggestion
any time
 without
second
 thought.
Friend
 will make fun of you and be hard with you when you does something wrong. The only one whom we can trust every single
second
 is
friend
. Trust is like a bridge between two persons in friendship, When a
friend
try
Suggestion
tries
 to lie or cheat the other that may lead to break down of friendship. Breaking trust can lead
to weaken relationship
Suggestion
to a weakening relationship
to weakening relationship
overtime
Suggestion
over time
 and sometimes completely as building the trust is not that easy. Misunderstanding is another thing that can weaken
relationship
Suggestion
the relationship
a relationship
relationships
overtime
Suggestion
over time
.
Accept space
.
 New relationships may decrease your time that you allocate to your
friend
, that may hurt your
friend
 and lead to
weakening
Suggestion
a weakening
 of relationships. Friendships are very meaningful when there is
good understanding
Suggestion
a good understanding
 between them, even though there is any issue between them, it must be solved by discussing about the issue openly
,
Accept space
,
 there may be some complications that can be simplified just by talking and discussing about the issue
.
Accept space
.
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