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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

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By dint of technology, the use of new websites and applications in order to find friends or have conversation with family and friends are becoming more common than previous media
such
 as television and other things. I believe that it gets worse in the future and I will mention the potential reasons. On the one hand, many
think
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think, although
although
 new media
is becoming
Suggestion
are becoming
 prevalent among some group of ages, the old ones have its fan significantly.
Firstly
, traditional family and
old
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older
 people prefer to watch television
instead
 of using up-to-date media. Because not only they can entertain themselves, but
also
 they are more familiar with it. Using modern technology could be tough as they have been using
this
 media for a long
years
Suggestion
year
.
Therefore
, it could be common among many people too.
On the other hand
, as the internet speed is becoming very high, the new application in order to attract people in various reasons have been invented dramatically. In
this
 way people can share their information, specially what things that has happened in
thier
of them or themselves
their
 areas or around the world. So they do not care about
news which
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the news, which
the news which
 publish from newspapers or on the other ways.
Also
, it is easy to watch movies online and have a lot of entertainments in cyberspace.
As a result
, the
nember
the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals
number
numbers
 of people who interested in using old media is decreasing sharply. In conclusion, I feel as new technology
invets
increase the likelihood of
invites
 every year, most people will change their lifestyle in order to follow
contemprory
characteristic of the present
contemporary
 lifestyle. It is predicted in the future less people use old media than now.

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