In many parts of the world and throughout the history,governments have moved their capitals.Discuss potential problems and benefits?Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital?

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In many parts of the world, there have been events when government

have

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has

moved

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move

their capitals either on

outcomes

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the outcomes

of the elections

a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters

are

due to some political reasons.

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changes have sometimes resulted in

benefits but

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benefits, but

majorly disadvantages for the people's.

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, I strongly condemn these changes. Some of the benefit's consists of getting new capital with

history

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a history

attached

with

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it which can garner a lot of tourism's attention and generate new economic opportunities.

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, bringing the

capital close

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capital, close

to the constituency of

current party

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the current party

in power helps them immensely in their personal political gains. The new capital

also

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occupies space in country map which adds extra value to

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

history which could be remembered for

quiet

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

long. But with these advantages, there are many disadvantages

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. Some of them are, fascination towards setting up life in new capital with hopes of new opportunities attracts a lot of people from around the capital who comes and dreams about new economic opportunities without any assurance.

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yields in push in population of

capital

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the capital

, many among which settles

anywhere even

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anywhere, even

without much concern of

promising future

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a promising future

. The price of land properties suddenly

sky rockets which

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skyrockets, which

skyrockets which

possess

introduce

poses

issues for many working class professionals who dreams of buying their own property in new capital. In conclusion, The movement of capital by the government if had some benefits. So, does it have many disadvantages associated with it to which a normal human life has to face up. Some of these challenges could be met while many couldn't.

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In many parts of the world and throughout the history,governments have moved their capitals.Discuss potential problems and benefits?Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?

the threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?