Some people believe that children learn better when they are placed in classes with children of similar academic abilities. Others believe that children learn better when they are in classes with children representing a diverse range of academic abilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Many people
percieve
to become aware of through the senses
perceive
that children learn better when they are placed in classes representing a diverse set,
others
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others, however
however
, believe that learning is enhanced when children are placed with other children of similar academic standing, that encourages quick learning and high chances of academic success, and I strongly side with
this
group. Clustering children with similar academic
acbilities not
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abilities, not
abilities not
only allows students to be agile learners, but
also
it improves their IQ levels.
This
is because surrounding a
child
with other higher achieving students stimulates an
enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
which is challenging, allowing mutual learning in a collective manner.
Furthermore
, each
child
becomes a positive reinforcement for his peers that encourages and fosters a positive outlook on academics. Healthy learning
thus
not only compliments higher IQ levels, but it
also
increases the probability of a
child
to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
into
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in
high standing tertiary school. High achieving children create an environment for healthy competition, and
thus
if they consistently score high during their school years and continue to challenge themselves by going beyond what others are learning, they will probably succeed more than others.
On the other hand
, allowing children to learn with children with a diverse range of academic abilities improves a
child
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child's
communication skills and allows them to be considerate of others in all academic matters.
Similarly
, a diverse range of children encourages extra curricular activities, as some children are better in sports than others.
Thus
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Thus, this
this
promotes a healthy academic-physical balance in their student life. While having a diverse set of children in one class encourages physical activities and improves communication skills, I believe the benefit of having children of similar academic standing learn together is much higher. It encourages healthy learning and
also
enables these students to perform well throughout their academic careers which ultimately paves way for a good tertiary education and a bright career.

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