Famous people sometimes give their opinion on the public topic. Is this a good thing? Explain to what extent you agree or disagree?

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People from different professions gets famous because of the new era of publicity and media. These could include the movie stars, singers, politicians and sports stars. Sometimes they take advantage of their popularity to promote values in the community. Famous people-like film stars, singers, cricketers live an

illusionary

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life

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with little contact with the ground realities of

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world.

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, sometimes they act like “A knight in shining

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protective covering made of metal and used in combat

armour

” and give their valuable suggestion about how to save the world.

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, I think it is completely out of context and should be avoided at all cost.

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, they earn an enormous amount of money and live an elite

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far from the ordinary people.

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, when they pinpoint some issue, they give unreal solution.

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, Mishaal Khan one of

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the best

-known film star, suggest how every woman should work round the clock in her profession, which resulted in a huge outcry from the general public, because not everyone can afford to pay for the maids to do the house work and babysit. Ordinary female has to handle all chores of the house,

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to taking care of their children.

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, some celebrities give statements, which are totally contradictory to what they do themselves.

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, they raise the slogan against rape, while they wear negligible clothes and instill low moral values in the society, or they talk against the dowry while spending millions on their own weddings. On the other hands, some people who get

hype

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the hype

of fame are doctors, lawyers, politicians. These meet with people relating to every walk of

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on a daily basis. Mostly, who are in dire need of help and right now at the lowest level of their

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with depression and anxiety,

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, they have firsthand experience of people’s

life

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. When they suggest some things for the betterment of society, it should be considered and tried to be implemented by all means.

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, Dr.

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Siren

Shrine

is one of children specialist, if she gives her opinion about children

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vaccinated

and hygienic issues, it should be promoted. In conclusion, various professions have different level of credibility against them, if they promote health, moral values and law, we should completely respect it.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

367 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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