Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

A
World
in Disorder By Javed. HUSAIN Unfortunately, the experience of the two decades and a half since the
end
of the Cold War shows that
mankind
is far from that goal.
Instead
of equilibrium, we witness a growing challenge to the existing US-led and West-dominated
order
from the emerging powers, particularly China, and
a
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an
reassertive
aggressively self-assured
assertive
Russia. Even countries
such
as India,
otherwise
closely aligned with the USA, and Brazil
have
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has
serious disagreements with the West when it comes to defining the rules of business in the spheres of environment and international trade.
Second
, major
world
powers have exhibited a dangerous tendency to resort to
unilateralism
in blatant disregard of the principles of international law and the UN Charter when dealing with
strategically
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strategical
important issues of war and peace. The US invasion of Iraq
of
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in
2003 is a case in point.
This
is not the only instance where principles were sacrificed at the altar of real politic. Several other major
world
powers have been equally guilty of disregard toward the principles of international law in handling
world
affairs since the
end
of the Cold War. A relevant example is the way the European powers handled the Bosnian crisis in 1990s.
Third
, justice and fair play have been the least of the considerations guiding the conduct of the major
world
powers in dealing with external affairs. The denial of justice to the Palestinians as an example substantiates
this
tendency.
Finally
, major
world
powers have generally failed to rise above narrow national considerations in the interest of the progress and welfare of
mankind
at large, especially in dealing with
such
global issues as climate change and international trade. It remains to be seen whether the
world
will be able to move toward a rule-based
world
order
in the best interest of
mankind
. Meanwhile, the
world
will remain in a state of disorder primarily because of the anarchic nature of international politics. The
end
of the Cold War generated unrealistic hopes of a new
world
order
based on justice, fair play, and the principles of the UN Charter. Even before the
end
of the Cold War, statements were made by
world
leaders, notably by Mikhail Gorbachev in his speech to the UN General Assembly on 7 December 1988, containing ideas for the creation of a new
world
order
. In his speech, Mikhail Gorbachev called for “a consensus of all
mankind
in the movement

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • holistic development
  • fostering
  • emotional intelligence
  • problem-solving skills
  • cultural awareness
  • curriculum
  • engaging
  • memorable
  • nurture
  • talents
  • core subjects
  • academic
  • professional success
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