Nowadays people spend less time at home. what are the reasons behind this trend. how can we solve this issue?
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.. Clubs, gym, restaurants are the places which allure the people towards them. Therefore
, rather than spending spare time
at home
, these entertainment outlets have encouraged them to visit there.
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, there are some measures which can be taken.Firstly
,
people could limit the working hours Accept space
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and indirect way they might spend time
with family.
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socal
activities which eventually will make their relation strong
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