Nowadays people spend less time at home. what are the reasons behind this trend. how can we solve this issue?

This
is
unaviodable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
inevitable
that the devotion of
time
has changed now.
it
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It
is widely observed that a considerable amount
to
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of
hours is spent outside by the people. But
,
Accept space
,
what have they gained living outside far from their family?
what
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What
if they devote quality
time
to their family?
well
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, giving no importance to family members has several
fastors
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
features
factors
which can be addressed if suitable measures are followed.
one
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One
of
cheif
most important element
chief
element not staying at
home
for
long
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a long time
time
is their
extensive
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extended
hours of work.
As
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At
maximum
time
is invested
at
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in
their work places presently to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the increasing demands of their family.
This
tendency keeps them away from their
home
.
This
is illustrated by the fact that at Alpha university in 2017 showed that 78% people had
benn
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
engaged in work just to have luxurious lifestyle.
Hence
, people have become isolated for
this
spending excessive
time
at
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in
offices. Another factor which
allow
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allows
the people to put themselves outside is
availability
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the availability
of various recreational activities in
thier
of them or themselves
their
home
town where they prefer to pay their huge amount of
time
than staying at
home
.After having hectic schedule, everybody have
desire
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a desire
the desire
to get serene ambience which might not be found at
home
.. Clubs, gym, restaurants are the places which allure the people towards them.
Therefore
, rather than spending spare
time
at
home
, these entertainment outlets have encouraged them to visit there. In order to attract them towards their
home
, there are some measures which can be taken.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
people could limit the working hours
that
is contributing
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are contributing
to put them away from
home
. The less working hours have
,
Accept space
,
the more they are able to sit with family. To address
this
issue,
government
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the government
can restrict the timing of places on some special
days so
Accept comma addition
days, so
that on these days, they cannot visit there. Eventually, they have to stay at
home
and indirect way they might spend
time
with family. Considering the all above said points, it is concluded that long working schedule style and having more options of spending
time
are incorporated in reducing the bonding with dear ones, but still to maintain relationship people must indulge
into
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in
socal
relating to human society and its members
social
school
activities which eventually will make their relation strong .

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