Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecological important. Discuss both views

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, we need to preserve forests and
wildlife
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zones as no
encroachment
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zones. No man-made constructions or any
time
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of
intervention
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should be allowed in these particular areas.
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, we need
awareness
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amongst individuals so that they help achieve the goal. It is easy to imbibe
this
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awareness
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in young minds and we can achieve
this
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by adding the
importance
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of
environment
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in their
curriculum
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. If the younger
generation
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is aware, they will make sure that we save our
environment
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and
wildlife
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.
For
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instance
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, we should
ban
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the
usage
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of items made of animal
skin
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like
fur
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,
leather
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products and so on.
This
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will automatically reduce the
demand
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and will stop animal killings. To
sum
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up, it’s very important to protect the
wildlife
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so that we maintain an ecological
balance
Use synonyms
. We can take several measures to make sure we take
care
Use synonyms
of the animals surrounding us like our own
kin
Use synonyms
.It is eminent that we humans need to take efforts to restore the
nature
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to its maximum original. In recent times, due to man-made constructions, selfishly killing the flora & fauna around us, most of the animals are getting disrupted from their homes and are on the
verge
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of disappearing. The
essay
Use synonyms
will discuss the
significance
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of safeguarding the natural
habitat
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of animals and how we can achieve the same. In my
opinion
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, it is extremely significant to look after the existing animal
species
Use synonyms
. With increasing human
encroachment
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in the
nature
Use synonyms
’s
habitat
Use synonyms
by disrupting forests to build cities, it’s getting alarming to protect the remaining ones. If we
don’t
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take steps to save the animals now, it will be too late.
Use synonyms
Loss
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one
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species
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, may trigger the
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loss
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of the others depending on it.
Thus
Linking Words
, by saving the endangered
species
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, we are trying to save
none
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other than ourselves. In
order
Use synonyms
to deal with the
issue
Use synonyms
, we need to take gradual steps towards improving our natural surroundings. Forests are the lungs of the
planet
Use synonyms
.
Firstly
Linking Words
, we need to preserve forests and
wildlife
Use synonyms
zones as no
encroachment
Use synonyms
zones. No man-made constructions or any
time
Use synonyms
of
intervention
Use synonyms
should be allowed in these particular areas.
Secondly
Linking Words
, we need
awareness
Use synonyms
amongst individuals so that they help achieve the goal. It is easy to imbibe
this
Linking Words
awareness
Use synonyms
in young minds and we can achieve
this
Linking Words
by adding the
importance
Use synonyms
of
environment
Use synonyms
in their
curriculum
Use synonyms
. If the younger
generation
Use synonyms
is aware, they will make sure that we save our
environment
Use synonyms
and
wildlife
Use synonyms
. For
instancee
an occurrence of something
instance
instance e
instances
instanced
, we should
ban
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the
usage
Use synonyms
of items made of animal
skin
Use synonyms
like
fur
Use synonyms
,
leather
Use synonyms
products and so on.
This
Linking Words
will automatically reduce the
demand
Use synonyms
and will stop animal killings. To
sum
Use synonyms
up, it’s very important to protect the
wildlife
Use synonyms
so that we maintain an ecological
balance
Use synonyms
. We can take several measures to make sure we take
care
Use synonyms
of the animals surrounding us like our own
kin
Use synonyms
.It is eminent that we humans need to take efforts to restore the
nature
Use synonyms
to its maximum original. In recent times, due to man-made constructions, selfishly killing the flora & fauna around us, most of the animals are getting disrupted from their homes and are on the
verge
Use synonyms
of disappearing. The
essay
Use synonyms
will discuss the
significance
Use synonyms
of safeguarding the natural
habitat
Use synonyms
of animals and how we can achieve the same. In my
opinion
Use synonyms
, it is extremely significant to look after the existing animal
species
Use synonyms
. With increasing human
encroachment
Use synonyms
in the
nature
Use synonyms
’s
habitat
Use synonyms
by disrupting forests to build cities, it’s getting alarming to protect the remaining ones. If we
don’t
Use synonyms
take steps to save the animals now, it will be too late.
Use synonyms
Loss
Use synonyms
one
Use synonyms
species
Use synonyms
, may trigger the
Use synonyms
loss
Use synonyms
of the others depending on it.
Thus
Linking Words
, by saving the endangered
species
Use synonyms
, we are trying to save
none
Use synonyms
other than ourselves. In
order
Use synonyms
to deal with the
issue
Use synonyms
, we need to take gradual steps towards improving our natural surroundings. Forests are the lungs of the
planet
Use synonyms
.
Firstly
Linking Words
, we need to preserve forests and
wildlife
Use synonyms
zones as no
encroachment
Use synonyms
zones. No man-made constructions or any
time
Use synonyms
of
intervention
Use synonyms
should be allowed in these particular areas.
Secondlyy
Suggestion
Secondly
, we need
awareness
Use synonyms
amongst individuals so that they help achieve the goal. It is easy to imbibe
this
Linking Words
awareness
Use synonyms
in young minds and we can achieve
this
Linking Words
by adding the
importance
Use synonyms
of
environment
Use synonyms
in their
curriculum
Use synonyms
. If the younger
generation
Use synonyms
is aware, they will make sure that we save our
environment
Use synonyms
and
wildlife
Use synonyms
.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, we should
ban
Use synonyms
the
usage
Use synonyms
of items made of animal
skin
Use synonyms
like
fur
Use synonyms
,
leather
Use synonyms
products and so on.
This
Linking Words
will automatically reduce the
demand
Use synonyms
and will stop animal killings. To
sum
Use synonyms
up, it’s very important to protect the
wildlife
Use synonyms
so that we maintain an ecological
balance
Use synonyms
. We can take several measures to make sure we take
care
Use synonyms
of the animals surrounding us like our own
kin
Use synonyms
.It is eminent that we humans need to take efforts to restore the
nature
Use synonyms
to its maximum original. In recent times, due to man-made constructions, selfishly killing the flora & fauna around us, most of the animals are getting disrupted from their homes and are on the
verge
Use synonyms
of disappearing. The
essay
Use synonyms
will discuss the
significance
Use synonyms
of safeguarding the natural
habitat
Use synonyms
of animals and how we can achieve the same. In my
opinion
Use synonyms
, it is extremely significant to look after the existing animal
species
Use synonyms
. With increasing human
encroachment
Use synonyms
in the
nature
Use synonyms
’s
habitat
Use synonyms
by disrupting forests to build cities, it’s getting alarming to protect the remaining ones. If we
don’t
Use synonyms
take steps to save the animals now, it will be too late.
Use synonyms
Loss
Use synonyms
one
Use synonyms
species
Use synonyms
, may trigger the
Use synonyms
loss
Use synonyms
of the others depending on it.
Thus
Linking Words
, by saving the endangered
species
Use synonyms
, we are trying to save
none
Use synonyms
other than ourselves. In
order
Use synonyms
to deal with the
issue
Use synonyms
, we need to take gradual steps towards improving our natural surroundings. Forests are the lungs of the
planet
Use synonyms
.
Firstly
Linking Words
, we need to preserve forests and
wildlife
Use synonyms
zones as no
encroachment
Use synonyms
zones. No man-made constructions or any
time
Use synonyms
of
intervention
Use synonyms
should be allowed in these particular areas.
Secondly
Linking Words
, we need
awareness
Use synonyms
amongst individuals so that they help achieve the goal. It is easy to imbibe
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
awareness
Use synonyms
in young minds and we can achieve
this
Linking Words
by adding the
importance
Use synonyms
of
environment
Use synonyms
in their
curriculum
Use synonyms
. If the younger
generation
Use synonyms
is aware, they will make sure that we save our
environment
Use synonyms
and
wildlife
Use synonyms
.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, we should
ban
Use synonyms
the
usage
Use synonyms
of items made of animal
skin
Use synonyms
like
fur
Use synonyms
,
leather
Use synonyms
products and so on.
This
Linking Words
will automatically reduce the
demand
Use synonyms
and will stop animal killings. To
sum
Use synonyms
up, it’s very important to protect the
wildlife
Use synonyms
so that we maintain an ecological
balance
Use synonyms
. We can take several measures to make sure we take
care
Use synonyms
of the animals surrounding us like our own
kin
Use synonyms
.It is eminent that we humans need to take efforts to restore the
nature
Use synonyms
to its maximum original. In recent times, due to man-made constructions, selfishly killing the flora & fauna around us, most of the animals are getting disrupted from their homes and are on the
verge
Use synonyms
of disappearing. The
essay
Use synonyms
will discuss the
significance
Use synonyms
of safeguarding the natural
habitat
Use synonyms
of animals and how we can achieve the same. In my
opinion
Use synonyms
, it is extremely significant to look after the existing animal
species
Use synonyms
. With increasing human
encroachment
Use synonyms
in the
nature
Use synonyms
’s
habitat
Use synonyms
by disrupting forests to build cities, it’s getting alarming to protect the remaining ones. If we
don’t
Use synonyms
take steps to save the animals now, it will be too late.
Use synonyms
Loss
Use synonyms
one
Use synonyms
species
Use synonyms
, may trigger the
Use synonyms
loss
Use synonyms
of the others depending on it.
Thus
Linking Words
, by saving the endangered
species
Use synonyms
, we are trying to save
none
Use synonyms
other than ourselves. In
order
Use synonyms
to deal with the
issue
Use synonyms
, we need to take gradual steps towards improving our natural surroundings. Forests are the lungs of the
planet
Use synonyms
.
Firstly
Linking Words
, we need to preserve forests and
wildlife
Use synonyms
zones as no
encroachment
Use synonyms
zones. No man-made constructions or any
time
Use synonyms
of
intervention
Use synonyms
should be allowed in these particular areas.
Secondly
Linking Words
, we need
awareness
Use synonyms
amongst individuals so that they help achieve the goal. It is easy to imbibe
this
Linking Words
awareness
Use synonyms
in young minds and we can achieve
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
by adding the
importance
Use synonyms
of
environment
Use synonyms
in their
curriculum
Use synonyms
. If the younger
generation
Use synonyms
is aware, they will make sure that we save our
environment
Use synonyms
and
wildlife
Use synonyms
.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, we should
ban
Use synonyms
the
usage
Use synonyms
of items made of animal
skin
Use synonyms
like
fur
Use synonyms
,
leather
Use synonyms
products and so on.
This
Linking Words
will automatically reduce the
demand
Use synonyms
and will stop animal killings. To
sum
Use synonyms
up, it’s very important to protect the
wildlife
Use synonyms
so that we maintain an ecological
balance
Use synonyms
. We can take several measures to make sure we take
care
Use synonyms
of the animals surrounding us like our own
kin
Use synonyms
.It is eminent that we humans need to take efforts to restore the
nature
Use synonyms
to its maximum original. In recent times, due to man-made constructions, selfishly killing the flora & fauna around us, most of the animals are getting disrupted from their homes and are on the
verge
Use synonyms
of disappearing. The
essay
Use synonyms
will discuss the
significance
Use synonyms
of safeguarding the natural
habitat
Use synonyms
of animals and how we can achieve the same. In my
opinion
Use synonyms
, it is extremely significant to look after the existing animal
species
Use synonyms
. With increasing human
encroachment
Use synonyms
in the
nature
Use synonyms
’s
habitat
Use synonyms
by disrupting forests to build cities, it’s getting alarming to protect the remaining ones. If we
don’t
Use synonyms
take steps to save the animals now, it will be too late.
Use synonyms
Loss
Use synonyms
one
Use synonyms
species
Use synonyms
, may trigger the
Use synonyms
loss
Use synonyms
of the others depending on it.
Thus
Linking Words
, by saving the endangered
species
Use synonyms
, we are trying to save
none
Use synonyms
other than ourselves. In
order
Use synonyms
to deal with the
issue
Use synonyms
, we need to take gradual steps towards improving our natural surroundings. Forests are the lungs of the
planet
Use synonyms
.
Firstly
Linking Words
, we need to preserve forests and
wildlife
Use synonyms
zones as no
encroachment
Use synonyms
zones. No man-made constructions or any
time
Use synonyms
of
intervention
Use synonyms
should be allowed in these particular areas.
Secondly
Linking Words
, we need
awareness
Use synonyms
amongst individuals so that they help achieve the goal. It is easy to imbibe
this
Linking Words
awareness
Use synonyms
in young minds and we can achieve
this
Linking Words
by adding the
importance
Use synonyms
of
environment
Use synonyms
in their
curriculum
Use synonyms
. If the younger
generation
Use synonyms
is aware, they will make sure that we save our
environment
Use synonyms
and
wildlife
Use synonyms
.
For
Linking Words
instance
Use synonyms
, we should
ban
Use synonyms
the
usage
Use synonyms
of items made of animal
skin
Use synonyms
like
fur
Use synonyms
,
leather
Use synonyms
products and so on.
Thiss
Suggestion
This
will automatically reduce the
demand
Use synonyms
and will stop animal killings. To
sum
Use synonyms
up, it’s very important to protect the
wildlife
Use synonyms
so that we maintain an ecological
balance
Use synonyms
. We can take several measures to make sure we take
care
Use synonyms
of the animals surrounding us like our own
kin
Use synonyms
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