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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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There are basically two ways
of
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to
 help. One is by offering support those who need your help and other is through national and international charitable organization. There are many advantages of helping through national and international organization. You can work on a larger platform and provide help FOR GLOBAL issue. A larger platform is must if you have a lot to offer in charity. Help activities can be better spread through a larger network. You feel part of a global village. Help needs
not be
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are not
 in the form of money. It can be in the form of service
also
.
For example
, if you are a doctor, you can provide medical aid and if you are
teacher
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a teacher
the teacher
, you can volunteer to teach in the under-developed nations. Help in any form is good. The condition of one’s country could influence your way of helping. If you belong to a developed nation
, where even poorest
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, where even the poorest
, where the even poorest
, even where the poorest
 of
poor
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the poor
 has the basic amenities of life, it would be better to help through national and international charitable
organizations but
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organizations, but
 if you belong to a developing or
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
 nation and have the resources to help,
then
 it would be better to help those around you. In conclusion, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that it is human nature to help who need it. Providing direct help and making donations through charitable organizations
are
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is
 just two different ways of achieving the same goal.

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