Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
This days many
people believe that those who have academic qualifications are successful and being a good student is the only way to succeed. Suggestion
To this day many
This day many
However I
do not agree with Accept comma addition
However, I
this
view because there are several factors in practical life
which determine the success
of an individual. I think one
of the most important requirement
to become successful in Suggestion
requirements
life
is hard working.
To begin
, many educational institutes are still following the old-fashion
and Suggestion
fashioned
out dated
methods of teaching; old; no longer valid or fashionable
outdated
Therefore
the creativity of many students does not flourish. Additionally
, students' talent are not assessed
by schools. The only thing Suggestion
is not assessed
that is
considered is their grade. Consequently many
students drop out. Accept comma addition
Consequently, many
Thus it
is evident that if a person fails in school, it cannot be a sign of intellectual weakness. Accept comma addition
Thus, it
On the other hand
it indicates some students are not able to benefit from conventional methods of learning. There are also
many students who fail in school because they have the passion for doing something other than education. For instance
, many athletes were not interested in study, but when they recognized their talent they succeeded in life
. Plus they
may be good at singing, painting or trading.
To be successful in Accept comma addition
Plus, they
life
, one
needs to possess some skills and personal traits. For example
, one
of the most valuable thing
is persistent effort. A person must have the right attitude, determination and willingness to work hard. Suggestion
things
Furthermore
, having some academic certificate increase
their chances of Suggestion
increases some academic certificate
are some academic certificate increasing
have some academic certificate increased
are some academic certificate increased
was some academic certificate increasing
am some academic certificate increasing
will some academic certificate increase
success
. Although
education could have a positive effect, without hard work and perseverance no one
can achieve success
in life
.
In conclusion, failure in school dose
not mean that people cannot become successful in mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
life
. Academic background could certainly improve a person's chance of success but
it is not the only reason for being successful. There are many important factors Accept comma addition
success, but
such
as hard working on regular basis
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a regular basis
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