Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

This days many
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To this day many
This day many
people believe that those who have academic qualifications are successful and being a good student is the only way to succeed.
However I
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However, I
do not agree with
this
view because there are several factors in practical
life
which determine the
success
of an individual. I think
one
of the most important
requirement
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requirements
to become successful in
life
is hard working.
To begin
, many educational institutes are still following the old-
fashion
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fashioned
and
out dated
old; no longer valid or fashionable
outdated
methods of teaching;
Therefore
the creativity of many students does not flourish.
Additionally
, students' talent
are not assessed
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is not assessed
by schools. The only thing
that is
considered is their grade.
Consequently many
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Consequently, many
students drop out.
Thus it
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Thus, it
is evident that if a person fails in school, it cannot be a sign of intellectual weakness.
On the other hand
it indicates some students are not able to benefit from conventional methods of learning. There are
also
many students who fail in school because they have the passion for doing something other than education.
For instance
, many athletes were not interested in study, but when they recognized their talent they succeeded in
life
.
Plus they
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Plus, they
may be good at singing, painting or trading. To be successful in
life
,
one
needs to possess some skills and personal traits.
For example
,
one
of the most valuable
thing
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things
is persistent effort. A person must have the right attitude, determination and willingness to work hard.
Furthermore
,
having some academic certificate increase
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increases some academic certificate
are some academic certificate increasing
have some academic certificate increased
are some academic certificate increased
was some academic certificate increasing
am some academic certificate increasing
will some academic certificate increase
their chances of
success
.
Although
education could have a positive effect, without hard work and perseverance no
one
can achieve
success
in
life
. In conclusion, failure in school
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mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
not mean that people cannot become successful in
life
. Academic background could certainly improve a person's chance of
success but
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success, but
it is not the only reason for being successful. There are many important factors
such
as hard working on
regular basis
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a regular basis
.

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