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Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

#illnesses
People are suffering from various health related issues
casued
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
caused
 due to
stress
.
This
essay
 will discuss the main causes of
stress
 related
illnesses including
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illnesses, including
 increased
work
pressure
 and
pressure
 of achieving financial goals.
This
essay
 will
also
 suggest the solutions to these
problems including
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problems, including
 proper
work
-life balance and financial planning. People are striving hard to sustain in the competition increased in the corporate domain. They are working under
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
 conditions just to achieve their desired financial goals.
For instance
, some employees
work
 in double shifts to earn more income to achieve the financial goal of children's education. Some people
work
 for
longer
Suggestion
long
 hours under tons of
pressure
.
This
 causes mental and
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
 strain and often result
into
Suggestion
in
 depression or obesity. Solutions to these problems are to maintain
work
-life balance. People need to realize that if they live only to
work
, they will suffer from life-altering events. They should spend some quality time with their loved ones to wipe out the
stress
.
For example
, if an employee
adapts
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
adopts
 smart working strategy, it will reduce the time taken to complete the tasks and
work
willl
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
well
 be done at ease.
This
 minimization of working hours will help one to focus on his hobbies to reduce the strain caused by
stress
.
On the other hand
, Financial Planning will give
assitance
the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose
assistance
 to achieve desired goals provided that the goals are realistic and specific. There are experts available to advise on financial planning. In
conculsion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, due to increased competition and pace of
work
, people are becoming ill
as a result
 of
stress
.
This
essay
 discussed how the
stress
 is caused due to longer working hours and job
pressure
 as well as the
pressure
 of achieving unattainable financial goals.
Thi
Suggestion
The
This
essay
also
 focused on the suggestions that might reduce the
stress
 and lead to a balanced life. Smart
working
Suggestion
works
 strategies to avoid longer working hours and financial planning to achieve goals are the main solutions to
this
 growing issue.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stress-related illnesses
  • hypertension
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • modern lifestyle
  • work pressure
  • technological advancements
  • social pressures
  • material wealth
  • work-life balance
  • mindfulness
  • meditation
  • stress management
  • flexible working hours
  • telecommuting
  • mandatory vacation
  • educational programs
  • mental health
  • supportive work environment
  • counseling services
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