Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Nowadays, it is observed that the countries around the globe in the future will face challenging situations not only to save the

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environment, but

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in certain sectors

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population

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control and

education

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. I profoundly believe that India would face the

environment

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and

population

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issues, and these circumstances can *be improved* if civilians and ~the~ government take proper measures from now on. There are many problems which are increasing day by day throughout the world because of human activities. To elaborate,

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, the

environment

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is what we all have in common, and

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is damaged due to pollution and trash (household or appliances) produced by humankind. If

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trend continues, there is no doubt that it may increase in no time.

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, the

population

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growth *had been* *rising* at an alarming rate than ever before *since* a decade *

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* ~and~ *Situations like these can create immense problems for the

population

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* in *the* near future.

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population

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issue can lead to unemployment because many parents cannot afford to pay the higher annual fees and

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children *could* drop out of *schools* *before completing* their

education

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. The solution to these problems should be *found* *as soon as possible* ~from now onwards~ to protect ourselves and our planet *

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* ~Earth.~ The government should create awareness *among* married couples about family planning programs which could be helpful *in* *controlling* the

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, the traffic police should impose high tariffs on ~the~ people who do not follow basic rules *about littering the place* *

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* ~as pollution checks on a regular basis.~

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, the

education

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minister of the country has to provide quality

education

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at an affordable price, *by* creating more and better institutes. In conclusion, every country around the globe is facing problems related to

education

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environment

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, and

population

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drastic measures need to be taken by the government and individuals because it is the responsibility of everyone to control

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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318 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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Your opinion

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