Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Nowadays, it is observed that the countries around the globe in the future will face challenging situations not only to save the
environment but
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environment, but
also
in certain sectors such
as population
control and education
. I profoundly believe that India would face the environment
and population
issues, and these circumstances can *be improved* if civilians and ~the~ government take proper measures from now on.
There are many problems which are increasing day by day throughout the world because of human activities. To elaborate, firstly
, the environment
is what we all have in common, and this
is damaged due to pollution and trash (household or appliances) produced by humankind. If this
trend continues, there is no doubt that it may increase in no time. Secondly
, the population
growth *had been* *rising* at an alarming rate than ever before *since* a decade *(
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population
* in *the* near future. Moreover
, this
population
issue can lead to unemployment because many parents cannot afford to pay the higher annual fees and hence
children *could* drop out of *schools* *before completing* their education
.
The solution to these problems should be *found* *as soon as possible* ~from now onwards~ to protect ourselves and our planet *(
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* ~Earth.~ The government should create awareness *among* married couples about family planning programs which could be helpful *in* *controlling* the Accept space
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population
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, the traffic police should impose high tariffs on ~the~ people who do not follow basic rules *about littering the place* *(
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Moreover
, the education
minister of the country has to provide quality education
at an affordable price, *by* creating more and better institutes.
In conclusion, every country around the globe is facing problems related to education
, environment
, and population
. Hence
drastic measures need to be taken by the government and individuals because it is the responsibility of everyone to control this
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