The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, many countries, especially affluent countries have been investing an astronomical amount of money to research on alternative to fossil fuels and taking it as the highest priority.
Although
it cannot be denied that investing in Linking Words
this
field can have potential advantages, to a large extent I believe that it should not be given highest importance because of its slow impacts as compare to Linking Words
other crucial phenomenon
Suggestion
other crucial phenomena
such
as poverty and Linking Words
gender
discrimination.
Perhaps most cited reason due to massive concern on finding out substitute-reliable resources is that burning fossil fuels has many severe detrimental effects. Arguably, it creates emission of fumes from vehicles, factories etc., which is largely responsible to air Use synonyms
pollution depletion
of Accept comma addition
pollution, depletion
ozone layer
and various respiratory diseases. Environmentalists, Suggestion
the ozone layer
therefore
argue that focusing on safer modes Linking Words
such
as solar panels and other new technologies can effectively save our planet from these catastrophic outcomes.
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However
, it cannot be denied that the amount of tasks involved in Linking Words
this
transition from fossil fuels to reliable alternatives Linking Words
are
huge. Clearly, Suggestion
is
it
not only require international cooperation but it is
it's
also
it cost a fortune which, undoubtedly, could be better spent on other burning issues, Linking Words
for example
extreme poverty and Linking Words
Use synonyms
gender gap
. Suggestion
the gender gap
gender gaps
World Bank report
shows that a significant proportion of individuals are living below extreme impoverishment which is considered the single most reason to malnutrition, poor standard of living, less longevity and illiteracy. Suggestion
The World Bank report
The world Bank report
On the other hand
, the negative repercussions arise due to Linking Words
gender
violence are paramount. In every Use synonyms
second
, millions of girls and women are Linking Words
victimed child
marriage, physical aggression, female genital mutilation, psychological assault or even death. Fortunately, Accept comma addition
victims, child
victims child
victimized child
this
horrific trend could be prevented if ministers take necessary steps Linking Words
such
as launch awareness-building programs. Many of countries, which had adopted various Linking Words
gender
development programmes, started getting the dramatic upsides rapidly.
Overall, it seems foolish to deny the pros of switching safer modes from fossil fuels to reduce the cons of
Use synonyms
overreliance
on fossil fuels. Suggestion
Overreliance
Nevertheless
, the benefits of more priority on other two preventable-Linking Words
solveable but
threatening issues--poverty and Accept comma addition
solvable, but
solvable but
gender
violence-- are outweigh to the advantages of exploring new renewable sources because of its cost- burden and sluggish outcomes.Use synonyms
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