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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their leaves of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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Over the past few decades, the number of people becoming overweight has risen in terms of declining of a regular physical activity. The issue of over-weighting can be addressed by individuals and the
government
 as I will discuss
further
 in the following essay. To start with, there has been a significant increase in the number of the population getting overweight and the possible reason for
this
 is that they may not have enough time to exercise after
work
.
In other words
, they are so exhausted because of long hours
work
 and high pressure
work
 environments, and they,
therefore
, prefer to sit in front of televisions or computers after
work
, rather than use the time to do physical activities. A good idea to solve
this
problem
 is that the
government
 should subsidise the budget on companies for the fitness facilities can be mounted. The
further
 step can improve
this
problem
 is that the companies should ask their employee to do the exercises before leaving
work
 places. I think the most obvious solution for people is they should participate in a wide rage of outdoor activities on weekends and it might increase the opportunity for exercising.
In addition
 to doing physical activities, the
second
 factor which has led to an over-weighting
problem
 is there are many
food
 choices, where people could pick up whatever they eat. Due to
this
 abundant option of
food
, people would eat outside rather than cook at home,
such
 as they may have fast
food
 to eat frequently. In order to make a solution for
this
problem
, the
government
 should impose a high tax on fast
food
 and the advertisement should be banned on the television. Another resolution for individuals is that adjusting the prices of various vegetables and fresh fruits could attract people's attention, they would consider eating them because of the prices. In conclusion,
although
 the possible causes may be lacking in exercise and eating unhealthy cuisine, and as long as the
government
 and individuals take joint responsibility, the potential body problems can be alleviated.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • calorie consumption
  • food desert
  • health disparity
  • nutritional education
  • genetic predisposition
  • metabolism
  • processed foods
  • public health policy
  • infrastructure
  • health promotion
  • awareness campaigns
  • dietary habits
  • lifestyle diseases
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