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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

#people #car
SQUANDER GRANDPARENTS ENCOUNTER MILITARY SATELLITE INTERCELLULAR
INSTEAD
 IMAGING ENROLL PERCEPTION DESIGNED PRIMARLY RELY EXCAVATION HUNDRED MESSAGE WEAPONS, NO ONE POSED Obviously, there are many skilled workers prefer to move out of from their home country.
Firstly
,
this
 is because their native place may not offer a better standard of living.
This
 means there may not be a good salary package, social security
benefis
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
benefit
, even promotions are given based on the bias and personal
preferance
a strong liking
preference
preferences
.
This
 can have serious impacts on the home country. One possible issue is that they often loss their most dynamic and talented academics, which severely affect educational institutions as they cannot train their future generation as they have less number of experts. Many areas badly hit with
this
: health care system, technology, and construction field. Apart from
this
, these nations tend to loss financially as well, nowadays, most of the countries offer free education to its children, but these children
,
Accept space
,
 later on migrating to developed countries.
This
 can lead a financial crisis.
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