The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the detrimental effects of obesity

on

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in

people have been

debated

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debating

significantly between

health

care system experts. I strongly agree that having regular sport exercises are beneficial and crucial at schools.

To begin

with, a minority of people believe to squander more

time

at school for sports can deteriorate children’s scores who are strict in their basic lessons which are

interfere

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interfering

with Math and

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relating to or used in chemistry

chemicals

chemise

comics

.

Nonetheless

, parents believe children do not have sufficient

time

to spend for sports at schools.

Hence they

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Hence, they

persist their children to attain high scores and decrease the

time

of sports

although

may neglect their

health

and throw them on brutal risk.

In addition

, they depict if they increase the

time

of exercises children might be

exhaust

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exhausting

exhausted

and lead to miss the gist of lessons. In any quest to compensate the lack of sports

time

’s schools,

skillful

having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude

skilful

experts have demonstrated accelerating sports

time

can flourish and improve the power of

brain’s

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brain

regions which are

deal

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dealt

with solving complicate lessons and relieve stress.

Moreover sports

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Moreover, sports

can increase the content of

lungs

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the lungs

to absorb high levels of oxygen and promote the brain’s functions. Plus those children

who

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whom

they have a strong muscles and are in good shape all of which are

consequences

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the consequences

they have high self-esteem because they appear gorgeous

an

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a

handsome in public. I strongly better children with high self confidence are successful than another because if schools encourage children to have a more

time

for sports they will attain high scores in their final exams.

Furthermore

the children who are in shape and pleasant and so

forth all

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forth, all

of which are the consequences of doing exercise, that lead to saving money not only can they be

health

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healthier

healthy

but

also

they do not spend a vast sum of money for

disease

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the disease

. In conclusion, the rate accelerating obesity

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among

people is dangerous and it is

crucal

of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

crucial

for experts write various articles about that and encourage schools to have a more physical education

lessons

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lesson

.

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my believe, families should pay attention children’s

health

and listen to the

health

care system alarms and support

then

for increasing sport

times

the subject matter of a conversation or discussion

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.