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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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Nowadays, it has become a trend for the younger people to start their own businesses rather than working for someone else. The youth finds it the best possible way to utilize their talents and to make money and
hence
 are not hesitating to risk their careers through
such
 initiatives.
This
 has got a lot of advantages and disadvantages which are discussed below. On the one hand, the modern education system, backed by the initiatives by the government to produce more job-creators, encourages people to become entrepreneurs. Students exposed to
such
 an environment naturally have a mentality that being self employed is the best way to pursue their interests.
Also
, any good
business
 idea is being welcomed by the private investors and governments are funded generously making self employment very attractive. Programmes
such
 as Skill India, Start up India and angel investing are the best examples of the initiatives by the government and private parties.
On the other hand
, most of the people who aspire to become entrepreneurs lack the
first
 hand experience of running a
business
 and fail to put up a proper
business
 plan even though they have creative
business
 ideas. A recent study by the Oxford University states that more than fifty percent of the startups have closed down within 2 years because of mismanagement of the
business
. Misplaced priorities, inefficient management of the funds, improper marketing have led to
such
 failures making the lives of people who were employed in
such
 businesses miserable. To recapitulate, though the option of becoming an entrepreneur looks very attractive, it is very essential for the people to have worked in organizations which run similar businesses, understand the nuances of running a
business
 and
then
 venture into
such
 activities.
Such
 steps will help them run a sustainable
business
 and achieve their goals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • align
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • productivity
  • advancements in technology
  • entrepreneurial spirit
  • financial rewards
  • constraints
  • employee benefits
  • administrative tasks
  • financial instability
  • job insecurity
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