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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.

#english #school #languages #risk
Learning english wh
ile sch
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
ooling is essential when compare to learning of any other local languages. If these are not guided many people may suffer a lot risks. Language is a necessary factor for everyone in order to communicate, to share opinions and thoughts. As English is an international language and it is spoken by people of more th
an
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in
 50 countries. By learning english pe
ople ca
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
n survive anywhere in the world. Especially, people who are planning to migrate abroad. As it is
also
 benificial
for the s
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
tudents for a well settle life.
For example
, students can get more oppurtunit
ies in a fiel
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
d of jobs and it may be useful to speak fluently with the clients in order to express opinions.
On the other hand
, local languages are
also
 benificial
for gaini
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
ng some knowledge ablut the
tradi
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about
tions and history in which people are following from so many years.
For instance
, the book of mahabarath
a is very h
elpful to know a lot about our traditions and distinct types of cultures. Here, local lang
uage is consid
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the local language
ered as the source of mother tongue. It is a mandatory thing for children to learn at their young ages. In my view learning English is much more important and
also
 the local languages too. In my view both languages are equally important for the children to learn at their s
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  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
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  • language revitalization
  • language policy
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