An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain where did you find this information why you want to apply this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to make an enquiry about a job advertisement on your website.
I would like to introduce myself first . I am a recent graduate from Middlesex University and actively looking for a job to gain more experience. I have completed my internship in
the International Maritime Organisation . I was assigned to the Finance Department and my project was utterly beneficial to them.
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Therefore
; I have an in-depth knowledge of database systems and I can be of any help in your company. Working in Fujitsu will widen my in-depth technical skills. I am a punctual and hardworking person who always thrives the best . As I am a
insight team leader , I can assure you that I can organise your team more effectively. If you hired me as a manager in your office , I would not disappoint you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
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task response
Make sure to mention specifically the position you are applying for early in your letter to clearly set the context.
coherence and cohesion
Avoid abbreviations (e.g., 'I am a insight team leader') that might not be clear to all readers. Use full titles or roles to be more explicit.
structure
Your letter is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence
You've effectively used paragraphs to separate different ideas, which aids in readability and flow.