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in Some Areas Of The US Teenagers Are Not Allowed To Be Out Of Doors After a Particular Time At Night unless they are accompanied by an adults

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In some parts of the United States, adults do not allow teenagers to leave the door after a particular time at
night
. In my perspective,
this
 is true because teenagers are too young to protect themselves from strangers. There are several benefits to why keeping children indoors at
night
.
First
, when out in the
evening teenagers
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evening, teenagers
 are more likely to catch dangerous criminals. Criminals have many tricks to create traps for teenagers to dive in without being aware of their actions. They start using drugs are gradually
addiction
Suggestion
addictive
 affects society.
Moreover
, criminals can kidnap and cause danger because it is
dark so
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dark, so
 no one can help or stop their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Second
, teenagers who go out at
night
 often gather with friends for drunkenness, and when returning home they can be at risk when driving.
Besides
, young people consume a lot of alcohol and they can fight when they disagree and easily lose friendship and danger to their bodies. Teens can not control themselves before their friends without their parents. So if kids want to go out at
night
 they should bring their parents along to warn them when they cross the limits.
in
Suggestion
In
 conclusion, preventing children from going out alone at
night
 is beneficial for them.
because
Suggestion
Because
 they are small and not aware of right and wrong. So they need to be protected by adults

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