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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

#students #internet #effects #purposes
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Nowadays, the
Internet
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 is used widely in education around the world. Some people say it is beneficial for teaching and learning because there is so much
information
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 available.
However
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, others claim that the
Internet
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 is bad for
students
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'
research
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 skills and believe that its
use
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 should be restricted. I believe that the
use
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 of the
Internet
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 should be limited in some ways, but it is still a valuable educational tool.
Firstly
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, the
Internet
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 is essential for many people today. It is widely used in the workplace and people's everyday lives, both for finding
information
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, for personal finance, for keeping in touch with friends and family, for social networking and so on.
Therefore
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, school
students
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 should learn how to
use
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 it correctly.
In addition
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,
students
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also
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 need it for
research
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 in school and university subjects. Nowadays the most up-to-date
information
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 can be found on the
Internet
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, rather than in books which can become out of date very quickly. Using the
Internet
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 is a convenient way of finding out
information
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 and developing independent
research
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 skills.
However
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, the
Internet
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 has some negative aspects.
For example
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, not all websites are reliable or contain accurate
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.
Students
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 need to learn how to evaluate and check the material they find on the
Internet
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.
Also
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, many
students
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 simply copy large amounts of material,
such
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 as essays from the
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. Some
students
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then
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 pretend that
this
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 material is their own work, which is illegal. If
students
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 simply copy
information
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 or material from the
Internet
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 without understanding or analysing it, they will not learn it fully. Teachers need to teach
students
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 how to
research
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 and
use
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information
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 from the
Internet
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 properly. In conclusion, schools and universities should teach
students
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 how to
use
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 the
Internet
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 by teaching them good
research
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 skills. If
students
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 know how to
use
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 the
Internet
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 effectively, they are likely to become better
students
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 and have better employment opportunities in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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