You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Paul, I am Tushar and I recently moved into the apartment

yours

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last

weekend. I am a student at the

university

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University

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of Copenhagen and I'm pursuing my MBA there. I am planning to host a

house-warming

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party at my place

this

Saturday, and

that is

the reason I am writing to you. The party would have only a few of my good friends from the university and we intend to play some music together at my place. It would start at around seven in the evening and we would try to wrap it up by

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midnight. I understand that it may get a little noisy,

however

, we would try and keep it low. I was wondering if you would like to join us for a few drinks at the party. It would be a good opportunity for us to know each other better, and that way you would not be bothered by the noise as well. Please let me know

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your plans. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Your neighbour, Tushar

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

177 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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