In the 21st century, many women have come out of their home to become what we call working women. What are the advantages and disadvantages of women doing work?
In the contemporary world, females have gained popularity in professional careers.
While
economic help for her family and for society's improvement Linking Words
are
the advantages, Change the verb form
is
Use synonyms
Work -life
balance and more health issues are the disadvantages for a working woman.
Add a hyphen
Work-life
To begin
with, the primary benefit is additional financial support. In a family, both working parents make more money to bear the household expenses. To illustrate Linking Words
further
, in many cases, Linking Words
women
save Use synonyms
her
salary for their kid's future education and spend only men's payments to run the house. Correct pronoun usage
their
Nevertheless
, the active role of Linking Words
women
supports society Use synonyms
also
. Working Linking Words
women
are involved in social Use synonyms
work
and come forward to help needy Use synonyms
women
.
Moving toward the disadvantages, Use synonyms
while
working Linking Words
women
feel socially and economically strong, many times they face tough situations to make Use synonyms
work
and life balance. To cite an example, after the job, Use synonyms
women
need to take care of the home, husband and kids. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they feel stressed sometimes. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
at
the working environment, employee needs to be Change preposition
in
act ive
all day. Many companies working hours are longer than 8 hours. Correct your spelling
active
Consequently
, the risk of health issues is much higher. Linking Words
For instance
, a teacher's job is required long hours of standing in class, which leads to them higher chance of back pain or leg pain.
In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages for working Linking Words
women
. they need to make a balance in life and Use synonyms
work
and focus on their health as well. Many Use synonyms
women
suffer Use synonyms
at
their old age because of too much Change preposition
in
work
done earlier stage. Use synonyms
Hence
, it is their personal choice Linking Words
depends
on their need.Correct pronoun usage
that depends
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