Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car

In our lives, we move from one place to another one for various reasons. While travelling, with developing the technology we are becoming dependent on

vehicles whether

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vehicles, whether

it is private

car

or public bus.

Besides owing

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Besides, owing

to a

car

brings some drawbacks, it has

greatly

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great

greater

benefits and

that is

why the number of the

car

owner is increasing every day. The main advantages of owing to a personal

car

are it gives the freedom of travelling. The person can become flexible about

destination

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the destination

destinations

, timetable or routes where will go and

also

will not have to set the

time according

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time, according

to the schedule of public

transportation

, wait for hours, stop every station to arrive the location.

Therefore it

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Therefore, it

ensures to travel comfortably in many ways.

Moreover

, a

car

-owner can take people who want to attend the journey with the goods

on the contrary

to public

transportation

. In terms of benefits, sometimes personal

car

might be cheaper, more safety and

more comfortable

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more comfort

.

On the other hand

, owing to a

car

has some disadvantages as well.

First

of all private

car

require

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requires

the garage place and parking issues.

Furthermore

, it

can not

can not

cannot

carry many passengers at a

time even

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time, even

if occupy spaces in the street. As the number of cars is increasing on the road so does the traffic jam and

also

is the huge damage to human health and the environment.

the

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The

more cars mean more air pollutions. Perhaps the major drawbacks of owing to a

car

are more expensive for a person who could have easily available public

transportation

.

If

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would have to travel alone, the cost per person might be

economic

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economical

. To sum up, I think the private

car

is a very useful vehicle that offers more advantages to its owner.

However

, the environmental issues as much as the expense of using cars should not be ignored if the public

transportation

system is accessible and efficient.