Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it
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It
is generally believed by some people that people learn
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
languages because they either want to immigrate for employment or for
travellling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
purpose while there are some people who do not agree with
this
opinion.
in
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In
my opinion people do learn other languages in order to achieve some kind of goals
,
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,
however
few of them learn languages because it is just
there
of them or themselves
their
hobby. To embark with
,
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,
a numerous of young generation is
enrolling
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enrolled
into the
instituites
set up or lay the groundwork for
institutes
institute's
institute
to adapt and explore popular languages of developed country as doing so would result in more diverse career
ootions
the right to buy or sell property at an agreed price; the right is purchased and if it is not exercised by a stated date the money is forfeited
options
for them.
For
instance in
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instance, in
asian
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
countries many
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countries, many
software engineers are
also
learning some french
languages so
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languages, so
that
this
will
increse
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
their credential scores to get good jobs and settle in the
europe
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European
Europe
euro
countries
.
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.
In
addition it
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addition, it
is now becoming
trend
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trendier
trendy
that
som
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
archeologists
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologists
archaeologists'
archaeologist's
adapt
variety
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a variety
of languages because it helps them to know
other countries culture
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the other countries culture
and diversity more precisely to illustrate
,
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,
Archeologist
an anthropologist who studies prehistoric people and their culture
archaeologist
of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
had
extra advantage
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the extra advantage
an extra advantage
by knowing
buddhist language
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the Buddhist language
Buddhist language
when they did research of their mythological lords while doing research in
shri
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Shri
lanka
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Lanka
.
on
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On
the other hand
,
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,
it is not always true that mankind
learn
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learns
is learning
has learned
has learnt
other languages just to achieve some purpose
,
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,
there are people
arround
in the area or vicinity
around
round
the world who enjoy learning and speaking
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
linguistics
for instance
a friend of mine who is a government employee and works with
agricultural department
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an agricultural department
has
recentely
in the recent past
recently
started taking
urdu
the official literary language of Pakistan, closely related to Hindi; widely used in India (mostly by Moslems); written in Arabic script
Urdu
adult
classes since it was her child fantasy. To conclude
,
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,
people tend to learn other
linguistics mostly
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linguistics, mostly
to
gjave
cause to have, in the abstract sense or physical sense
give
a better
lifestyle but
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lifestyle, but
its
the thing named or in question
it
is not always the case
,
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,
there are few among us who learn just to explore other languages.

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