Some people say that the best way to improve public health is b increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Initially

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refers to the speaker or writer

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strangly

with strength or in a strong manner

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believe that sport is very important of

maters

a vaguely specified concern

matters

which of them, not only can keep healthy society but

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they can help to

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raise the level or amount of something

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a young person (especially a young man or boy)

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better than

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the past

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so

to a very great extent or degree

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let you know more about me and how

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subggect

the subject matter of a conversation or discussion

subject

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Increasing number

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An increasing number

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The increasing number

of sport facilities

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are

the easy path for the

gavernmets

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government's

governments

for keeping

bith

two things or people together

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birth

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a form of energy that is transferred by a difference in temperature

heat

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society but

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society, but

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for

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

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point of view about

incearsing sport fasility

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an increasing sport facility

increasing sport fasility

increasing sport facility

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is enough. I think that they as parents or adults who have

responsiblity

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

in the their family, have many

concern

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concerns

about their

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a young person (especially a young man or boy)

youth

member in the own

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self, family

, they believe that by

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becoming greater or larger

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On

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

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coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude

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group

believe

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believes

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motiveit

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motive, it

motive it

is not

adequat

having the requisite qualities or resources to meet a task

adequate

for making

health society

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health, society

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

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places

whithout

in absence of

without

concedering

deem to be

considering

young

peolpe

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person

people

person's

needs, are not

usefull

being of use or service

useful

and they say before of any moving and thinking about

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problem, it is better to significant to

haighest

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the highest

highest

required by young

peaple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

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to

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concloud

decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion

conclude

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have a same idea about

neccessary

absolutely essential

necessary

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peroblasms

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

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lacks

tell anonymously

leaks

or needs

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why

this

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result can help us to both make a

best

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better

good

way and

dession

make or work out a plan for; devise

design

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