Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Good morning.
I am writing
this
letter by requesting for offering an award to one of our community person, who helped poor people by started
a charity called "Help for Need". He spent almost 50 Change the form of the verb
starting
percent
of his salary Change the spelling
per cent
for
helping Change preposition
apply
this
cause. Also
, he spread this
charity information to other communities across our district to get more support.
Charity
started getting funds and distributed them to needed people in the form of food, clothes, Bedsheets and blankets. And, money Add an article
The charity
A charity
spent
to build a small 10-20 bed cottage for stay purpose.
I strongly Add a missing verb
was spent
belives
that, he is well deserved to be awarded Correct your spelling
believes
with
"Helping Hands" for his work. He is most kind and responsible, Remove the preposition
apply
increasing
Add an article
an increasing
number
of hands to join to gather to get more funds and support.
Trust has plans to expand Correct article usage
the number
in
Change preposition
at
state
level and Correct article usage
the state
also
to spread across the country to open different branches to help not only community
and Correct article usage
the community
also
for
Change preposition
apply
the
all the poor people who are waiting to look after their needs.
Thanking You,
Siva Krishna KCorrect article usage
apply
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,