Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, Good morning. I am writing
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letter by requesting for offering an award to one of our community person, who helped poor people by
started
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a charity called "Help for Need". He spent almost 50
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of his salary
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helping
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cause.
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, he spread
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charity information to other communities across our district to get more support.
Charity
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The charity
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started getting funds and distributed them to needed people in the form of food, clothes, Bedsheets and blankets. And, money
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to build a small 10-20 bed cottage for stay purpose. I strongly
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that, he is well deserved to be awarded
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"Helping Hands" for his work. He is most kind and responsible,
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number
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of hands to join to gather to get more funds and support. Trust has plans to expand
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state
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level and
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to spread across the country to open different branches to help not only
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and
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for
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the
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all the poor people who are waiting to look after their needs. Thanking You, Siva Krishna K
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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