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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claim that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which point in the articles you agree with. Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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 letter with reference to an article that was published by your newspaper
last
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 Saturday. I apologize, but I am not fully in agreement with the content details, in which the author of the article stated that downtowns in my country look homogenous to each other. First of all, I would like to say thank you to your team for publishing
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 informative article about my country's guided tour. There is no doubt that you have mentioned some points in accordance with reality,
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 as recent developments around the city
centers
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 and problems related to
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car
parkings
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. But unfortunately, I found some information irrelevant as compared to the present state.
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, the town
center
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 of Delhi represents
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ancient architecture and the nation's heritage. But on the flip side, Chandigarh's city centre shows the modern framework of buildings. I would like to invite you to my country. I will be able to guide you through several town
centers
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 and
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 provide you with ample information about downtown backgrounds.
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, you will be in a better position to depict the whole story wisely. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Parneet

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logical structure
Ensure that each paragraph clearly addresses a distinct element of the task. This letter effectively separates agreement, unique aspects of the town, and the guided tour offer, but making the transitions smoother and more explicit can further improve clarity.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and suit the letter format well. Consider personalizing the greeting by addressing the editor by name, if known, for a higher level of formality.
single idea per paragraph
While the letter already does well in discussing a single idea per paragraph, further developing each idea with more detailed examples or explanations could strengthen the overall effect and coherence.
complete response
Your response comprehensively covers all the facets asked in the prompt. However, including more specific examples or personal experiences relating to how your town’s center differs could make your argument more persuasive.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is generally suitable and respectful, fitting the context well. To improve, consider varying sentence structure to enhance the flow and make the writing more engaging for the reader.
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