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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Ria, I hope that your family and you are doing well. I really had a great time on vacation with you.
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 was one of the best vacations so far.
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 was really grateful
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 you for taking some time out of your busy schedule and spending it with me. I thank you for having me at your place and it was like a home away from home making the vacation more comfortable and enjoyable. Kindly thank your mom for serving us delicious food throughout my stay there. It was indeed a memorable trip and I would cherish it for
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. After coming back home, I realised that I forgot my wallet on the study desk of the room, where I slept. I kept it aside while booking my cab to the airport and forgot to take it in a hurry. I would request you to kindly courier it to my residence address as early as possible as my driving license and bank cards are there in it. I am so sorry for troubling you. Convey my regards to your parents. With love, Siri

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • memorable
  • grateful
  • remarkable
  • incident
  • essential
  • postage
  • courier
  • identification
  • reimburse
  • parcel
  • delivery method
  • anticipate
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