“A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject.” Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply

Dear James, I hope
this
letter finds you well! It's been a
while
since we
last
caught up, and I wanted to drop you a quick line about
this
course
which has been held at the college. Recently, I studied the
course
computer networks at university and got a high score. Actually,
this
course
includes information and skills related to networking
as well as
the design and implementation of computer networks,
as well as
maintaining and troubleshooting them. Definitely, I prefer
this
course
for you because it gives you new data and practical information that increase your skills for sucking the best job.
Also
, the teacher for
this
course
is learning is perfect professor.
On the other hand
, he has a lot of skills and knowledge in her field.
Finally
, if you are interested, apply for
this
course
by the university website.
Also
, I suggest you talk with Mr Bond about applying for
this
course
because of is the learning manager. Best wishes, Mohsen
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task achievement
In the section about recommending the course, clarify your reasons with more detail, maybe with personal experience or specific advantages the program provided. This will enhance your task achievement score.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph maintains a clear focus and flows smoothly to the next. Consider breaking up the longer paragraphs or restructuring them to have one main idea each.
task achievement
The letter includes a friendly and genuine tone, which is well-suited for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Uses a clear structure with a greeting and closing, making it easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure is mostly maintained, and the sequence of information is orderly.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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