Nowadays, Internet addiction is becoming a common phenomenon. What are causes and effects of this problem?

In modern society
Internet
addiction has become a prevalent and publicly recognized phenomenon. There are a number of reasons behind
this
tendency and I would argue that it has a serious negative impact on society. There are two main reasons as to why people are getting addicted to the
internet
.
Firstly
, a majority of people is highly exposed to the
internet
thank to cutting-edge technology
such
as 5G,
smartphone
Suggestion
smart phone
, and other technologies.
This
means that these people can easily gain access to the
internet
; thereby surfing
internet
and playing online
videogames
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video games
for hours.
Secondly
, people who are overly shy, suffer from low self-esteem, and have a fear of disposal could not build a relationship with their peers;
as a result
, they often use social networking sites as an image of who they would like to be.
Therefore
, these people could find more comfort since
internet
activities on these platforms fill their needs. The effects have been very critical. The
first
effect is that
internet
activities have the result of isolating people and discouraging human interaction as many youngsters choose to make friends online rather than meeting their peers.
Consequently
, these people could not expand their social circle that might be highly beneficial to their academic performance or their future careers. Another effect is that people who become over-reliant on
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
could accompany a sedentary lifestyle. As a consequence, these people are prone to obesity, heart attacks, and diabetes. In conclusion, some reasons why people are increasingly over-dependent on the
Internet
and
this
phenomenon should be addressed urgently.
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