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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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In today's global society, increasing trend of immigration has a major impact on the community. Many people are migrating from developing to developed country because of the better health, life prospect and employment opportunity. The various impacts of
this
 are elaborated
further
.
To begin
 with, many people tend to migrate to other developed nation due to healthy lifestyle, to earn well and for better living standards. Many developed countries have higher
employment wages
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employment, wages
, which is
also
 one of the main advantages of migrating. These countries provide a variety of employment opportunities with higher pay packages.
Moreover
, these developed nations
also
 provide free health care, high school education to kids, and welfare amenities to get settled in their place.
For instance
, united states provide free education to teenager till high school and
also
 provides
scholership
financial aid provided to a student on the basis of academic merit
scholarships
scholarship
 for their higher studies.
However
, at times
,
Accept space
,
 not every
migrats
habitually moving from place to place especially in search of seasonal work
migrants
migrates
 get the desired job of their domain. In
this
circumstances one
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circumstance, one
circumstance one
 has to end up taking
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 job apart from their field of experience
for
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in
of
 daily living.
Additionally
, immigrants inability to speak
local language
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the local language
also
 pulls them back
in
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into
 getting a relevant work.
Hence
, keeps them out of contributing into the economy of the country.
For example
, many doctors are
talking
very attractive; capturing interest
taking
 the job of a driver in
United Kingdom
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the United Kingdom
, due to their inability to pass in
lisenced
authorize officially
license
licence
licenced
 examination. To summarise, immigration in society is an increasing
treand
a general direction in which something tends to move
trend
trained
trends
 because of the essential living standard in the developed nation, with the impact on the lower side making people to take the risk for a better life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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