You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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, My name is Ehijie Christopher and most times my friends call me Christopher. I just moved into the new Unit 2B which is the duplex building directly opposite your house. I have seen your kids around and they have started to get acquainted with my children. I have two sons and one daughter. I presume you must have seen them ride their bicycles close to your parking area. I will like to inform you that

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Saturday 19th November my daughter will be 10 years old. I have made her a promise that we will hold a big party for her. I will

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want to invite you and your lovely children to

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celebration on Saturday. It is going to start

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12pm and it will be a lot of fun. I want to

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let you know that the party will mainly be a children’s party, but there will

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for parents to have a nice time and get to know each other. I have made

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for a game truck, bouncing castle and a comedian. There will be quite a lot of noise from these kids. Please bear with us. Hoping to see you there. Regards, Xis

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

204 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Write about the following topic: Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduate get better job. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individual and society.

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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world developed rapidly through telecommunication and air travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?