These day many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in term of family development.

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Nowadays, people migrate to other nations to
job
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the job
and they take their family members with them as well.
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,
this
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phenomenon has more shinning outcomes
instead
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of I'll -effects. There are numerous merits of
this
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trend.
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with, in the foreign they obtain many amenities like
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,
health treatment and education.
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, youngsters take excellent
education
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education, therefore
therefore
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, they can easily gain fruitful work in their
further
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.
Moreover
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, more employment opportunities for all age individuals in
develop
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developing
countries
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countries, hence
hence
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, people acquire job easily.
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, when they go with their
family
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families, then
families then
then
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they do not need
worry
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to worry
about their children and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
family members.
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, when parents do not keep on eye their children they join incorrect activities like,
such
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youngsters take drugs.
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,
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,
they with their parents that time children do avoid
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kind of activities.
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, masses know the lifestyle that nation and they can improve their lifestyle because folks to live
better lifestyle
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a better lifestyle
in
develop
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development
countries.
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, opponents consider that, people should go alone
for
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to
work to another state. Because
of
introduces a conditional clause
if
they do not need to purchase
house
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houses
they can live in accommodation.
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, if families move overseas for better facilities
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, their own nation have not
well
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wellness
good
educator
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educated
educations
, lawyers and doctors. What is more, children face certain complications make new friends and they need to learn
new language
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a new language
new languages
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, children have not friends they feel dull. To
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conclude
,
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,
this
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trend is beneficial for individuals
nevertheless
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, they suffer certain difficulty when people commence
live
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lives
in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
nation.
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