Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagee?

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In today's world, it has become essential to look confident and clothes play a major role in accomplishing it. Most of the people judge the character and culture of others
by
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of
their choice of wearing. But, I
am not agreed
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have not agreed
don't agree
do not agree
with the statement and will discuss about it in
further
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sections of the essay.
First
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of all, it is a personal choice what to wear and what not. Everyone likes to
dress
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according to their comfort
zone so
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zone, so
, it is not morally right to make a point of view on anybody's
clture
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
or values.
However
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, it can depend upon the occasion
such
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as traditional clothes are preferred while going
in
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to
a wedding or a family function and
on the other hand
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, casual wear is considered more while hanging out with friends or during shopping.
Therefore
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, it is difficult to tell anything about the personality of an individual as different attires are preferred at different occasions.
Secondly
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, some people
likes
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like
to wear according to a latest fashion and fashion varies from time to time.
For instance
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, if today, short skirts are in
trennd
a general direction in which something tends to move
trend
trained
while after few months, it can be bell bottoms.
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Third thing
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The third thing
is that nowadays companies want their employees to look professional, so they instruct a
dress
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code for them. But these
dress
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codes are meant for only work places and not for parties or ceremonies.
On the other hand
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, some people
says
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say
that clothes can tell a lot about a person. It can be possible sometimes as some professions require a particular
dress
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up
such
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as an on duty policeman or a doctor or
a lawyer etc.
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a lawyer, etc.
But
this
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can only tell about their work not their moral values. In the end, I just want to say that to some extent the choice of clothes helps in telling about a
person whereas
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person, whereas
to
the larger
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the largest
extent, it is not possible.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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