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Research is an essential part of completing assignments. Suggest some good places to obtain useful information.

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In today's world, education is not
completed
Suggestion
complete
 without deep knowledge of the subject. Research plays a major role in understanding a particular area and completing the assignments or projects. In
this
 essay, different places are suggested from where useful information can be gained. Libraries are the primary and easy source of information since older times as they are available in all educational institutions and can be easily accessed by students. Public libraries are
also
 provided by government for common people in cities. One can look at the library
catalog
a book or pamphlet containing an enumeration of things
catalogue
 and get the information regarding each and every book, journal or literature present there. In the today's era of internet, digital libraries are
also
 convenient to utilize if anyone knows how to use
internet
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the internet
. One can read or download files from websites and databases. Another important way of getting the knowledge is face to face interviews with veteran people who have a lot of experience in their field. These people
belong
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belonged
 to these fields in the past and have hands on experience which is equally important as theoretical knowledge of books.
Furthermore
, subject teachers and mentors are
also
 experts
of
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on
 their subjects and are the storehouse of
informaton
a message received and understood
information
. They can
also
 help in clearing the basic concepts. Other methods
such
 as market survey, feedback forms, government offices etc.
can
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Can
also
 be included for obtaining data.
Finally
, I pen down stating that education is a foundation
to
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for
of
 a well developed society and research is conducted to complete the assignments helps in creating deep and logical thinking among students. Students who learn to analyse the things have more chances of getting success in future.
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