In today’s world of digital technology, many people are using eBooks rather than paper material and I think there are various benefits of using online material, but it causes some problems to the libraries.

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and foremost reason is the easy availability of eBooks. The individuals can use it by sitting anywhere or anytime.

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prefer reading any kind of stuff related to studies from the internet as it is a very convenient way to gain knowledge and make assignments.

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, it saves time and money because the material of many authors is available at

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place and there is no need to waste time to find books in the library or to purchase heavy stuff.

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to it, paper is saved by using the digital technology.

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, trees are cut down to make paper and

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of the biggest reasons of pollution. Students

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get bored by reading the books, but they find eBooks interesting to read because the pictures, audio or video are

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available online. According to a recent statistics revealed by the Department of Technology, 80% people prefer to read through the internet rather than going to the library. The interest of the people towards eBooks causes some problems to the libraries. These libraries are closed due to lack of interest of the people. Loss of wealth is the concern as for the infrastructure of the libraries, much money is spent which is being wasted. To exemplify, in my hometown recently

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famous library has been abandoned by the government because no

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the individuals prefer to use online stuff due to its number of advantages, like time and money saving, but the libraries suffer a lot because of the unlimited usage of eBooks.

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In today’s world of digital technology, many people are using eBooks rather than paper material and I think there are various benefits of using online material, but it causes some problems to the libraries.

Fully explain your ideas

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could best be taken to solve it?

Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil.To what extent do you agree/ disagree?

Some say that reading newspapers and watching TV news is a waste of time, because it has no direct connection with people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?