Most countries have traditional celebrations that ocur annually. İn Your opininon, what benefits do these celebrations have for society? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowladge or experience.

Nowadays traditional celebrations

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are

crucial for many

society

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societies

. Because of these conditions have a great

benefits

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benefit

for citizens as well as society welfare level.

For

instance provide

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instance, provide

become together citizens out of

work

, provide release stress throughout

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the year

and provide keep in touch of citizens. An important benefit of traditional celebrations that provide become together citizens out of

work

place. The people spend

to

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

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much

the with

work

place with

coullage

an associate that one works with

colleagues

.

However usually

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However, usually

workplace is being formal area and has a formal act.

This

case caused some problems.

For example

this

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

thus

able to take place distant

releationship

a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)

relationships

among

coullages

an associate that one works with

colleagues

and indirectly among citizens in

work

time. İn addition to the traditional celebrations supply that releasing stress of throughout

year

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the year

with other people and other families. The people usually vacation with just their nuclear family to releasing stress.

However traditional

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However, traditional

celebrations particularly

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celebrations, particularly

ocur

come to pass

occur

occurs

annually celebrations supply

entartainment

an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention

entertainment

, enjoy,

besides

keep out

intense business world

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the intense business world

together.

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Another

benefit of traditional celebrations that ensure keep in touch of citizens.

This

is especially significant in the modern world.

Also

, with improving technology, widespread use of social media looming some problems. One of the most important of these is lack of contact

among

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between

citizens. İn order to avoid of

this

problem, traditional celebrations of great importance for society. Humans have been enjoying

celebrations

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the celebrations

since ancient times. Taking into account all of these, we able to see that the traditional celebrations are how many important for citizen life and social life. (245 words)